Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #5, comparison. In the words of Betty Drevniok: “In haiku the SOMETHING and the SOMETHING ELSE are set down together in clearly stated images. Together they complete and fulfill each other as ONE PARTICULAR EVENT.” She rather leaves the reader to understand that the idea of comparison is showing how… Read More #haiku – Surprising
Carpe Diem #660, Impressions. in the faint light of the departing sun – a sedge warbler sings © Chèvrefeuille sundrops fall all over nature is burning in light shadow faints away
Carpe Diem Special #129, Sogi’s 5th haiku. Now that they end There is no flower that can compare With cherry blossoms © Iio Sogi Ah! those cherry blossoms every where I look their beauty amazes me again – finally spring is here © Chèvrefeuille enlightening words like nature’s cherry… Read More #haiku Balm for Soul’n Heart
Carpe Diem’s “Little Creatures” #16, Daisies. oh my dearest named after star daisy sweetest little dog
Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #70. sweet perfume mingles with the sound of rain – a dog barks © Chèvrefeuille still flowering after rain filling space with pink clouds © Birgitta Rudenius
Carpe Diem #651, Picking Young Greens (wakanatsumi). cool dawn – an old Indian picking young greens © Narayanan Raghunathan late at night picking young greens in the kitchen garden – the almost full moon © Chèvrefeuille the seven sacred early morning’s sunny… Read More #haiku Porridge
Carpe Diem #650, First Rooster Crowing (hatsutori). first rooster calling wake up for week’s vivid work the wind is quite
Carpe Diem Special #127, Sogi’s third “dewy evening“. Both grasses and trees waiting for the moon dewy evening © Iio Sogi (1424-1502) HAIKU dew glisten meadow swaying in a last dance the moon is humble TROIKU dew glisten meadow grass and flowers sing refrain end verse is waiting swaying in a last dance softly kissing… Read More The moon is humble
Carpe Diem #637, Departing Year. slow rains as if leaves were falling at winter’s end © Jane Reichhold sweeping the garden at the end of this year to start fresh © Chèvrefeuille leaving the darkness everything was sleeping time for a wake… Read More Spring light
Grattis på födelsedagen Mia Lilla! Var du nu befinner dig i världen – I Spanien gissar jag. Önskar av hela mitt hjärta att du har det bra. Kram Birgitta Mia Lilla – Regnbågsflickan.
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