Carpe Diem Special #127, Sogi’s third “dewy evening“.
Both grasses and trees
waiting for the moon
dewy evening © Iio Sogi (1424-1502)
HAIKU
dew glisten meadow
swaying in a last dance
the moon is humble
TROIKU
dew glisten meadow
grass and flowers sing refrain
end verse is waitingswaying in a last dance
softly kissing the sweetheart
farewell is nearthe moon is humble
a scene of nature romance
eyes closed by stars
© Birgitta Rudenius
Wonderful haiku in the spirit of Sogi and what a gorgeous Troiku you have written Birgitta.
Thanks a lot! 🙂
Beautifully done!
the mood here is serene but with a poignant melancholy undertone
nicely done
cheers
jzb
Thanks jazzbumpa!
What an enchanting set. The story in the middle troiku is enchantingly sad.
Everything seems to have slowed down, just to prolong those moments… Lovely…