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#haiku – Counting

Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #42, 5-7-5 not easy.

Tuesday night
sitting and counting
one two three

Wednesday morning now
still counting all syllables
black coffee is strong

when sun is up
city is ready for human life
river singing in waves

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14 thoughts on “#haiku – Counting

      1. Birgitta, you asked in the comments on Carpe Diem how the English count syllables but we count them in exactly the same way as the Dutch or Swedish and your haiku fit the pattern perfectly. We don’t have some “free” way of counting – each distinct sound is a syllable. Kristjaan unfortunately is using a computerised syllable counter that is getting it wrong, so his 3/5/3 and 5/7/5 haiku weren’t actually right. So just keep doing what you’re doing!