Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #36, Haiku Noir
Bewitching shadows
watchful eyes view threats in night
love is a strangle.
Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #36, Haiku Noir
Bewitching shadows
watchful eyes view threats in night
love is a strangle.
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That last line was thought-provoking..
🙂 I think it was meant to 🙂
Love certainly exudes strange feelings. Strangling is often a valid threat! Nicely Birgitta!
Hank
Oh, they definitely do look like they’re strangling one another. Classic Film Noir motif — well done!
Thanks 🙂
Love has been called many things, so it’s quite an achievement to start a line “love is…” and provoke a shock at the end. Well done 🙂
Thanks Blake!
An awesome photo with a haiku written towards it as black as the image itself … lovers can be strangling eachother … it’s sometimes good to let the loved one go and do something for yourself. That makes the relation stronger … nicely written haiku noir …